Here’s a suggestion: you’ve summarised each section very shortly. It’ll be good to develop each point separately. You can even write articles about just one point.

As a critical reader, I’d think that your points are too brief for anyone to make a sound judgement.

Just a suggestion. Hope this helps!

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